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Hi Justus, thanks for sharing your awesome news article about Rangitoto erupting, I can imagine the NZ Herald would report the news exactly like this. I have always enjoyed writing pretend front page of newspapers, I think I actually wanted to be a journalist when I was young.
Kia ora Justus! My name is Mariam in room 8, This is an amazing article! I can see you have done some creativity with It. It's nice! What would you like to be when you grow up?? You would make a perfect journalist not saying you have to be it but you also have other choices ahead of you! Maybe you could make the title a bit stronger? and try to also hook the audience? Other than that this is a workpiece! Tino Pai! (great job!) I hope you and your family are staying safe! Blog you later!
MΔlΕ e lelei Justus, It is a funny thought to imagine one of the old, still maunga of Auckland becoming a hissing, smoking, dangerous volcano! I liked the way you used volcanic terminology in your article like active volcano. Next time you could also add more information from your planning document, like the last time Rangitoto erupted or how and why the hot spot below Auckland caused the latest eruption. I'm looking forward to your next post! Blog you later, Megan : )
Kia Ora Ms Judd, I think I actually can add some more detail to my article and some more planning info. Thank you for the feedback :) Bye π₯ππ₯₯Justusπ₯₯ππ₯
Hi Justus, thanks for sharing your awesome news article about Rangitoto erupting, I can imagine the NZ Herald would report the news exactly like this. I have always enjoyed writing pretend front page of newspapers, I think I actually wanted to be a journalist when I was young.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Justus
ReplyDeleteI love your NZ papper its great
Blog ya later,
Danica
Kia Ora Danica,
DeleteThank you for the feedback and commenting on my blog!
Have you done this before?
Nga Mihi
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Kia ora Justus!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mariam in room 8,
This is an amazing article!
I can see you have done some creativity with It.
It's nice!
What would you like to be when you grow up??
You would make a perfect journalist not saying you have to be it but you also have other choices ahead of you!
Maybe you could make the title a bit stronger? and try to also hook the audience?
Other than that this is a workpiece!
Tino Pai! (great job!)
I hope you and your family are staying safe!
Blog you later!
MΔlΕ e lelei Justus, I am so pleased you enjoy writing this article. You certainly have the audience in mind when writing as it is interesting.
ReplyDeleteMΔlΕ e lelei Justus, It is a funny thought to imagine one of the old, still maunga of Auckland becoming a hissing, smoking, dangerous volcano! I liked the way you used volcanic terminology in your article like active volcano. Next time you could also add more information from your planning document, like the last time Rangitoto erupted or how and why the hot spot below Auckland caused the latest eruption. I'm looking forward to your next post! Blog you later, Megan : )
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ms Judd,
DeleteI think I actually can add some more detail to my article and some more planning info.
Thank you for the feedback :)
Bye
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