Kia Ora Guys this is my writing coin operated I hope you like my writing.
Also this story was fun to write.
Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above |
On a blazing hot afternoon, a boy named Sam was walking on a concrete path and also playing with his toy rocket. Playing with his rocket, Sam saw a massive rocket that said it could fly to space and that was actually his dream. Excitedly, He hopped on the rocket and pressed the button to go to space. Suddenly, it just wasn’t working. He kept pressing the button but still it wouldn’t work. Sam was really sad and frowned but then he realised that it cost money. Excited, Sam wanted to open a lemonade stand to earn money to fly on the rocket. So Sam opened the lemonade stand and he waited and waited decades and decades because barely no one came. But eventually people started to go to the lemonade stand. Then finally Sam got enough money to go on the rocket and make his dream come true. Sam looked at all of the money that he had and he was so excited to go on the rocket. walking to the rocket dragging the money in a bag, Sam smiled and looked at the rocket. Finally getting his dream, Sam put all of the money in the machine and was ready to fly to space. Sam pressed the button but it didn’t work, he pressed the button again but it still didn’t work. Sam was really bummed out and thought that he just wasted all of his hard earned money but then the last coins dropped. Sam pressed the button for the last time then the engine started and the rocket turned 90 degrees. THen blast off! The rocket flew off to space and Sam felt like he was in his childhood, achieving his dreams. Sam really changed because he never gave up and he was persistent even though he had to wait decades. |
Justus your descriptive vocabulary is excellent and makes your writing interesting to read...words such as persistent, decades, hard earned and blazing are some examples. Great work
ReplyDeleteDeb