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Kia Ora Guys this is my Character Descriptive Writing that i did. I hope you like it. If you would be doing this what type of descriptive writing would you do?
Talofa lava Justus, you have given your troll so much personality with your descriptive writing. I love your sentence starter "Promenading"! You have also used fantastic vocabulary. Remember to keep rereading your work to check your sentences make sense and flow. blog you later, Megan
Talofa lava Justus, you have given your troll so much personality with your descriptive writing. I love your sentence starter "Promenading"! You have also used fantastic vocabulary. Remember to keep rereading your work to check your sentences make sense and flow. blog you later, Megan
ReplyDeleteMalo e lei lei Ms Judd
ReplyDeleteIt's me Justus,
Thank you for your feedback and i will check my work as fast as possible :).
Bye
🥥🥥Justus